Year: 2022

Evaluation

This week I learned what an Evaluation is.

Evaluation is when you have to think about two sides of an issue.

First I had to discuss with my group if we should allowed pets on trains or buses. I say no because they might not behave or be a respectful pet to other people who are on the buses or trains.

Next I had to read information about Furry companions allowed to ride Auckland trains and buses. It says in the story that Anne Batley Burton suggested there could be a special carriage for pets in trains and buses.

Then I had to write down some information about why we should allow pets on transport or why we should not allow pets on transport.

I enjoyed learning about why we should allow pets on transport and why we should NOT allow pets on transport. I did well at explaining why we should allow pets on transport. I need to improve on explaining more information about why we say yes and no.

Athletics

This week I did athletics day.

First I started off with discuss. Our coach and teacher explained the rules. I had to do a swing over but with the actions Mr Wong taught us.

Next I started off by doing high jump. For high jump I have to make jump high on the side to see who has the high jump. If you jump and you did not make it you can have another try after the round finishes.

After I started off by shotput. In shotput you get a ball and put it on the side of your chin and then point. Then when you are ready push the ball to throw.

Lastly we lastly started off by doing sprinting. When you come 1st, 2nd, or 3rd you get a stick that tells you what number you are. I came 1st for the year 5 girls.

I enjoyed doing high jump. I enjoyed playing shotput. I need to improve on pushing the ball further.

Commenting Thread

I learned how to comment on other people’s blogs.

First I learned the main things to write on a blog post. For example : If I comment on someones blog post I will have to say a greeting, what I enjoyed, a thoughtful comment, a question, and what I learned.

Next I had to write a feedback on who replyed to my blog post. I have to reply back to their comment. For example: Kia Ora Kaysorn, I really appriciate the way you enjoyed how I explanied what evaluation is. I agree I do need to improve on adding more information. No I have not taken a anmial on a public transport. I am so happy you know what evaluation mean. Kind Regards, Brooke.

I enjoyed doing this task. I did well at commenting to other peoples blgo post. I need to improve on writing something basic.

Train Transport

This week I learnt how to design transports.

First I learned the 3 transport which are land, rails, and air. I had to design this in my own imaginary.

Next I had to pick a transport. The transport I picked was a Train because it goes on land and rails.

Lastly I picked the train and designed the train. Then I had to title the train and label the train. For example : the front window.

I enjoyed making the labels. I did well at making the train. I need to improve on learning more about the transports.

Informal letter

This week I learnt how to write a informal letter.

First I learnt what informal is. Informal is maing a letter to somebody that I know really well.

Next I learnt how to write are informal letter. For a informal letter I will need to have a greeting, paragraph, closing of letter, and a signature.

Lastly I had to write 3 letters. I wrote the 3 letters to my mum, Dad, & my cousin. These people were the people that I wrote the 3 letters to.

I enjoyed making the letter to my mum and dad. I did well at making the letters to the 3 people. I need to improve on not putting the last names in informal letters.

Explanation About Train Design

This week I learned how to Explanation About Train Design.

First I had to pick any vehicle that is part of air, sea, land, and rail. I chose a type of train because it goes on rail.

Next I had to draw a train by myself on a google draw. I had to also desgin the train and label the parts that’s on the trains which are the wheels that goes on rails, flash light, the front wheel, the side windows for people to look outside while the train is moving.

Then I had to introduction what i’m gonna say. For example : I chose to create a vehicle shaped as a train but has things to go on rail & land. My vehicle has car wheels and my vehicle has windows for people to look at and a front window for the passengers to look at while driving. The train has buttons to activate them. 

Lastly I had to write down an explanation about how does it helps society. I written down : This vehicle helps society by going on rails and lands. My train, which is shaped like a train, has buttons to activate the wheels and the door as it stops at the train station. My train has doors for people to come out of the train when the passenger is in the right direction for the people who want to go. 

I enjoyed doing this task. I did well at explanation. I need to improve on explaning more about the train that goes on rails & adding more label onto the train.

Commenting

I learned how to comment on other people’s blogs.

First I learned the main things to write on a blog post. For example : If I comment on someones blog post I will have to say a greeting, what I enjoyed, a thoughtful comment, a question, and what I learned.

Next I had to write a feedback on who replyed to my blog post. I have to reply back to their comment. For example: Kia Ora Kaysorn, I really appriciate the way you enjoyed how I explanied what evaluation is. I agree I do need to improve on adding more information. No I have not taken a anmial on a public transport. I am so happy you know what evaluation mean. Kind Regards, Brooke.

I enjoyed doing this task. I did well at commenting to other peoples blgo post. I need to improve on writing something basic.

 

Marble Maze

How to make a Marble Maze.

A Marble Maze is fun for kids to play with & take it home.

Materials.

  • Cardboard
  • Straws
  • Glue
  • Pen
  • Scissors
  • Ruler
  • Your Maze Marble paper

How to Make a Marble Maze :  We have to get a cardboard for everyone to place their Marble Maze Paper onto the cardboard.When we place the paper we have to get a small bottle of glue & glue it onto the lines that are on the paper. When you have done you also have to get the straws and stick it onto the glue that is along the line.  You have to also get long straws to place onto the corner to block the way the marble goes out of it. 

Final step : You have to get a Marble and play with it. Enjoy!

Evaluation

This week I learned what an Evaluation is.

Evaluation is when you have to think about two sides of an issue.

First I had to discuss with my group if we should allowed pets on trains or buses. I say no because they might not behave or be a respectful pet to other people who are on the buses or trains.

Next I had to read information about Furry companions allowed to ride Auckland trains and buses. It says in the story that Anne Batley Burton suggested there could be a special carriage for pets in trains and buses.

Then I had to write down some information about why we should allow pets on transport or why we should not allow pets on transport.

I enjoyed learning about why we should allow pets on transport and why we should NOT allow pets on transport. I did well at explaining why we should allow pets on transport. I need to improve on explaining more information about why we say yes and no.

Formal Letter

This week I learned how to write a Formal Letter to Santa.

A fomal letter is when you write a letter to a person that you don’t really know.

First I had to write a formal letter to Santa. I started of by writing a fake address, a date, greeting, paragraphs, closing of the letter, and signature. Example : the fake address I writtten : 11 Beach St, the date : 6/12/2022, the greeting : Greeting Santa, the paragraph : I have been a good girl really lately, closing of letter : Regards, Signature : Brooke Monet Winterstein Puiri. These are what I have written for my formal letter to Santa.

Next I had to greet the person who I am sending the letter to.

Lastly I had to write the paragraph and sign the letter with my name.

I enjoyed doing this task. I did well at writing the paragraph. I need to improve on writing more paragraph.